Thursday, March 09, 2006

The Cold Within...


As you guys know I am here to inspire, educate, and entertain. So today I am posting a very deep poem that will hopefully make us all think about our how we treat others and how we look at the world.The poem is by James Patrick Kinney and I hope you will all enjoy it as much The King.




It is called "The Cold Within":



Six humans trapped by happenstance
In black and bitter cold
Each possessed a stick of wood,
Or so the story's told.

Their dying fire in need of logs,
The first woman held hers back
For on the faces around the fire
She noticed one was black.

The next man looking 'cross the way
Saw one not of his church
And couldn't bring himself to give
The fire his stick of birch.

The third one sat in tattered clothes
He gave his coat a hitch,
Why should his log be put to use
To warm the idle rich?

The rich man just sat back and thought
Of the wealth he had in store,
And how to keep what he had earned
From the lazy, shiftless poor.

The black man's face bespoke revenge
As the fire passed from his sight,
For all he saw in his stick of wood
Was a chance to spite the white.

And the last man of this forlorn group
Did naught except for gain,
Giving only to those who gave
Was how he played the game.

The logs held tight in death's stilled hands
Was proof of human sin,
They didn't die from the cold without,
They died from the cold within.

Wasn't that great? I hope you enjoyed and will be able to take something away from it.

184 comments:

TTD said...

and what exactly did YOU take away from it??

Ddot the King said...

That if you treat others like crap you will die!!! LOL

BK said...

Interesting.. Lemme ponder this.. I'm in a different zone right now

Ddot the King said...

First of all Bombshell let me welcome you to the most popular place on the world wide web!! I hope you will become a regular. I will expecting to be linked on your page by the end of business. Thanks in advance. :)

And yes I find it very interesting as well. Did anybody see the tv show Black & White last night?

TTD said...

no.. but i heard that's supposed to be a really good show. did u see it? how was it?

Ddot the King said...

Yeah I watched it last night. It was very interesting.

Ddot the King said...

I just realized that Caramel is Bklyn Bombshell!!! LMAO!

TTD said...

i saw the previews for it.. it looked like it would be..

TTD said...

OMGoodness! LOL.. you look so different w/o the blonde!

Drama Kween said...

lol i was about to say king if you visit other people blogs more often you will see who they are when the come to your kingdom...lol re-greeting folks...

I liked the poem it was soooooo much better than most I heard last night...

fyi after yesterday's fiasco i renamed my blog to my kweendom (though somebody did that name for me on link on their blog)

BK said...

LMAO @ you King.. gawd.. you are soooo SELF CENTERED.. LOL.. Tell em Kween if he visited mo often he would know!!!

I am not really thinkin bout this.. I can't.. my mind is in my Biggie Zone.. so pardon me..

Black & White.. did not watch it.. I saw part of the making and I was already irritated by it that I didn't want to watch it.. and listening to the Steve Harvey show this am coming in.. I see my feelings were mirrored by others.. We'll see though. i may watch it next week for gp

BK said...

speaking of linking.. YOU NEED TO LINK ME... since I'm no longer Blogger of the Week..

Ddot the King said...

You mean you guys want me to visit other peoples blogs?! You can't be serious!

My Kweendom?! Oh brother.

Drama Kween said...

lol...I mean think about it King...wouldn't like to see the background and read the expressions of the people that come to your kingdom...or at least the ones you have linked...they may actually represent something you are totally against....like kobe lovers or something and you would never know cuz you rarely venture out

chele said...

Good morning. I really enjoyed the poem. It was a sad depiction of our own society. People would rather die than help somebody that is different than themselves.

I missed Black-White. I wanted to see it but I got the times mixed up.

Visit other people's blogs? Well, he did visit me yesterday. I feel so privileged!!!!!

Drama Kween said...

oh yeah on topic...what did i take away from the poem...life is already short enough, but to live it with a defensive spirit, or with any kind of hate or racism will only make it shorter

TTD said...

i know right! how about.. unless u visit (and comment) more, you'll be de-linked (if that's a word!) and no one who doesn't already know about you would ever come to visit!

Drama Kween said...

i second that TTD

Drama Kween said...

it's very simple...i have put myself into practicing this daily...go to your own blog...click on your links and the post for the day on each blog...you'll be amazed as to how easy it is...lol

Drama Kween said...

and heres the kicker....leave a comment....oh my

Mahndisa S. Rigmaiden said...

03 09 06

Good poem. Kinda makes you take stock of how you behave:)

Ddot the King said...

If I leave a comment on a million blogs then I'm no longer exclusive. Did you see what Chele said? She felt priveleged. That is the feeling I want folks to get when I leave a comment. I'm The King baby I do whatever I please...

TTD said...

i believe she was being sarcastic!

Drama Kween said...

The King...lol

Ddot the King said...

Sarcasm? That's not allowed her in The Kingdom!!

Drama Kween said...

the king cannot be pegged...he's so diverse :-D

TTD said...

yes he can kween.. he can be pegged as an arrogant jerk that can be tolerated :o)

Grant said...

Personally I would have used my log to bash in their skulls, make a fire, and then roast their carcasses for dinner, but I would have done it without regards to race, sex, or religion. I'm an equal opportunity destroyer.

Drama Kween said...

but TTD he is so much more than that...He's a prick...a dick head...a butt hole...and sometimes overly sensitve punk...lol

Love you King

NegroPino™ said...

Hey Julissa :)

NegroPino™ said...

I did stay up to watch at least 30 mins of it.....i wish the Black ppl had better make up if Micheal can do it so can they.....the family they picked to me wasn't realistic......They shoulda got them some ppl from the hood not from suburbia.......and the premise for the show was DOES RACISM STILL EXIST IN AMERICA? Nobody gotta go undercover to know the answer to that.....

NegroPino™ said...

R.I.P. BIg..just had to get that out the way

NegroPino™ said...

Good morning Gang

BK said...

TTD.. I'm wit you there.. how about a 3rd on that motion!!!

Drama Kween said...

maybe we should de-link him and have him earn his right to be linked again....hmmm

TTD said...

i was about to say missy.. how can you speak to julissa & not everyone else! but good morning..

chele said...

sarcasm? me?

TTD said...

im wit that kween! and caramel.. yuor were the 3rd.. so it's official! everyone de-link d!!

Ddot the King said...

I'm good JG. Thanks for asking. I'm glad you didn't join the BASH THE KING party.

TTD said...

she doesnt know the real you yet.. dont worry overtime, she'll see & will be on our side :oP

Ddot the King said...

Very well said VX...


But I hate winter!!

Drama Kween said...

funny thing is, if we de-link him he'll never know...lol

TTD said...

jenny.. he put you under his spell.. dont worry, you'll snap out of it soon! :o)

true.. but no one new would ever come visit him! and he lives for new women to visit so he can flirt w/ them!

Hali said...

I did enjoy that poem. People are too busy being tight that they are also loosing out in the end. Great poem. Black & White was interesting. I expected more, but maybe it will reveal more next week.

Ddot the King said...

Freakalee I am charming and witty so intelligent women are going to be attracted to me but no I am far too shy and too picky to get any play from anybody. I haven't gotten any in almost a year!

Ddot the King said...

Yeah Hali I am expecting a little bit more action as the weeks go on from Black & White but it was a pretty good start.

Is this your first time here? Let me go check your blog out to make sure you have me linked over there!

Drama Kween said...

TTD can I do it???

King can I do it???

Ddot the King said...

LOL...let's keep the peace. You gotta have a good sense of humor if you're going to hang out. LOL

Drama Kween said...

oh i am laughin, and i will have fun...and it will be ENTERTAINING :-D

Drama Kween said...

oh no Julissa, she just having fun...please she'll tell you that she already had King...but you know everyone has to do charity work from time to time...King is such a good guy...

Ddot the King said...

Absolutely. But I like a bit of a challenge.

Ddot the King said...

I'm not arrogant enough to think these little catfights have anything to do with me. It's a woman thing.

Drama Kween said...

awwww LadyCav...do I sense tension in your typing...fyi you used bitch out out of context...I am not a female dog...though some can say that you look like one, so maybe you should use that word for yourself sweetie
:-}

Rell said...

68 responses by 10:55 a.m. and I thought I got here halfway early.

Drama Kween said...

for the sake of the kingdom...LadyCav lets just shake hands and chill...

Ddot the King said...

Sup Rell....we gonna win the ACC tournament or what?

NegroPino™ said...

Da hell did I stumble upon?

TTD said...

im w/ u julissa.. she only pops up to say something negative when we're ALL here just to trip & have fun and make our work day go by quickly..

Drama Kween said...

TTD and JUlISSA exactly...
now moving on
TTD i am so glad you are amongst us again..my double mint twin
:-)

Drama Kween said...

wow...again out of context...i was just thinking about linking you too...since you're not linked over here...

Drama Kween said...

now see let's relate this situation to the poem...myself, TTD, Julissa, and LC sitting around a dying fire...who would give their stick up to feed the fire...lol

TTD said...

i wanna live.. so i'd give my stick, but i'd also do a little of what grant suggested.. LMAO

Drama Kween said...

lol...TTD, I was thinking the same thing...

Rell said...

this is ummm weird -- yall plan on recording the rest of this fight? :-)



Ddot, got em' fighting over you like that son?

Na I think we lose in the ACC semi-finals which really isn't a bad thing.

Drama Kween said...

lol Julissa...

Drama Kween said...

RELL lol RECORDING...lol when everything in here is already recorded...

Rell thanks for the love btw

Ddot the King said...

Rell this foolishness has nothing to do with me. Trust me.


I see where you're coming from on losing in the semi-finals. I just want someone other than Duke to win.

TTD said...

lol @ julissa.. ok.. what u said!

and rell.. no one is fighting over D.. nobody wants him! people.. no, someone just thinks everyone wants D.. and continues to bring negative energy into what's supposed to be a fun environment

TTD said...

go Terps!! LOL yeah right.. like that'll ever happen again in the near future!

Ddot the King said...

You mean none of yall want me?! LOL

Ddot the King said...

Thanks Jenny. LOL

Drama Kween said...

and I am still co-heir of the throne..so i already have him...

TTD said...

my bad ya'll.. correction! i dont want his ass!

Ddot the King said...

Ok so now that we got that straight let's move on.

Drama Kween said...

lol...King...u need to right a poem...

Ddot the King said...

Ok Toya that's enough.

Drama Kween said...

lol...wonder how your man would feel about that...

Rell said...

ladies, ladies there is only one Ddot. But I'm here (though you gonna have to fight GP) lol.

Rell said...

oh wow is somewhere here one of your real life ex's?

BK said...

da hell is going on in here! I think we need to go back to my INTERNET identity post.. LMAO..

Rell said...

jordan symbol is all yall get for now...

Drama Kween said...

lol and Nikki Rell???

TTD said...

toya = ladycav

and yes she is a real live ex

Rell said...

only in your stories Kween, nikki is my homie, older sister type.

Or we got a case of "How stella got her groove back" even though nikki ain't that old.

I'm only 23! So much to learn, haha.

D I'm calling a Duke-NCSU final with Duke winning.,

Drama Kween said...

Rell you have to go back to a post king did in Jan to see what toya is to king

Rell said...

D to answer your question early I saw black.white last night.

That was some of the realist/funniest television in quite sometime.

TTD said...

i dont know who the contender will be for the acc final, but i definitely see duke there.. but i have to rep.. i would love to see md there although thats not gonna happen

Rell said...

wow -- she has nothing better to do with her time?

Ddot the King said...

I hope Duke loses in the first round!! I know that's just wishful thinking but I still hope it happens!


Maryland doesn't stand a chance.

Ddot the King said...

Yeah I really liked Black & White and I think it's going to get better.

Drama Kween said...

i would love to see MD in it too...but all way can do is talk to the Lord and Pray for 'em

Drama Kween said...

Rell "wow -- she has nothing better to do with her time? " what are you talking about??

Drama Kween said...

you know the type
loud as a motor bike
but wouldn't bust a grape
in a fruit fight

Drama Kween said...

wow...

Rell said...

i'm so confused -- I can't tell what's parody and what's real.

Drama Kween said...

u r a trip...and from the looks of things you're prolly right...what breed are you pit bull, or mastiif or a combo of both with a lil pug in the mix?

Drama Kween said...

The only thing that's gonna happen is i'mma get to clappin
you and ya girls gon be yappin to the captain

Ddot the King said...

Chill Toya all that extra info isn't necessary.

Ddot the King said...

Is that Angie?! Wow! No lurking allowed Ang!

TTD said...

i thought the beef was dead??

Ddot the King said...

Well we're going to have to break that habit Angie! I need to see a picture of you too!

Ddot the King said...

Jenny that's a good question. They all seem normal when I meet them.

Drama Kween said...

i know king ain't talking about no pics...lol

Drama Kween said...

SEEM lol

Ddot the King said...

Mysterious huh....ok well do your thing.

TTD said...

LOL @ angie.. I was thinking the same thing when I wrote it

Ddot the King said...

Look we're going to stop talking about that subject ok ladies? Let's move on.

Ddot the King said...

Open forum sounds good. What is on your mind Angie?

Ddot the King said...

Seriously Toya I'm going to start deleting everything you post. Stop with the nonsense.

Ddot the King said...

Yeah I like poetry. I used to write a lot more than i do now. I've been to open mic but I've never had the nerve to get up and perform. Maybe I will someday.

Drama Kween said...

lol that's an easy question to answer...

FORUM: Since this is a day that will always be honored in Hip Hop...what are some of you all's greatest hip hop memory...

When do you first fall in love with Hip Hop?

Drama Kween said...

sorry been watching a lot of brown sugar...i love that movie

Drama Kween said...

not too mention you puttin another person's business out there...

NegroPino™ said...

WOW!! I went to lunch and come back....scroll up and got some info.......

Ddot the King said...

Yeah I might come check that out. I try to stay away from B-more as much as possible but I guess I can make an exception for this. :)

Ddot the King said...

Wazup Missy!!! Disregard all that other stuff.


I loved Krush Groove too! I used to watch it over and over.

Ddot the King said...

Angie I hate D.C. streets too so I'm an equal opportunity hater. lol

Drama Kween said...

my wonder can tell you that i am not a true hip hop head, so when i first fell in love with hip hop is when it merged with r&b...the best of both worlds it became for me...i would rap from time to time, but mjb helped me fall in love with hip hop...

TTD said...

i didnt like hip hop at 1st.. i guess Biggie did it for me...

and what's up w/ boycotting bmore...

Drama Kween said...

D if you can survive Chocolate city, than some areas of bmore is a stroll in the park for you...

Ddot the King said...

I think Run DMC did it for me in the beginning and it really popped off for me again when The Chronic,Southernplayalisticcadillacmusic, and Ready to Die all came out back to back to back.

TTD said...

i used to mess w/ salt-n-pepper too.. but more in their latter days

Ddot the King said...

Salt & Pepper might have caused me to go into puberty! I loved them chicks. PUSH IT was too much for me. Everytime I heard it or saw the video...well let's just say it caused a reaction. LOL

Drama Kween said...

oh i was all on salt and pepa...hardcore...i was salt my home girl was pepa and my othe homegirl was spin (on the fischer price joint)...but i wasn't hip hop conscious then...but i did love them

salt n pepa's here and we're in effect want you to push it babe...

Ddot the King said...

Don't even get me started on Tupac!

blackcaesar said...

the poem was excellent.
i can relate.
long time no speak.
i've been on military exercise.
i am back.
shiznit happizziles.
carry on.

TTD said...

gone to lunch.. brb

Ddot the King said...

What's up Black!! Good to have you back!

Drama Kween said...

alright now that i let some steam out on my blog...i am back and better than before
:-D

Ddot the King said...

SO MANY TEARS!!! That's one of the best tupc...nah...One of the best songs ever...period! I love the whole ME AGAINST THE WORLD album.


I'm doing my Biggie tribute on Arson's blog so go over there and participate.

TTD said...

i'll pass.. not much of a fan of arson.. but my husband did a post on Biggie as well

Ddot the King said...

TTD it's my post. Arson hasn't posted on his own blog in months.

TTD said...

ok.. i'll check it out then..

Drama Kween said...

lol...

Drama Kween said...

WHY THE SILENCE

Ddot the King said...

I just got back from lunch. I don't know where everybody else is...

Drama Kween said...

ok...next time let us know, thanks honey!

Kip said...

That was a very good poem King Thank you for sharing it.

Ddot the King said...

You're welcome Chance. You're a little late today, what's the deal?

Kip said...

I like the writings guy De maupassant he wrote similar type short stories that had to do with human character defects check him out sometimes if you have not already read or heard of him.

He was french (france).


Chance

Kip said...

I'm so busy with writing and answering email from good people whom email me. Also I stayed up late last night into the wee hours of the morning. I love the night, the night is feminine and the day is masculine.

Chance

Kip said...

Speaking of tupac, death row (now called Tha row) records is located in beverly hills at the corner of wilshire blvd and San vincente. There is a big sigh that says Tha Row. You can't miss it I have pssaed by there many times. Sometimes there are low riders out there.

Kip said...

Blogs and Links,

I read some comments about blog and links here left by certain commenters.

Well all blogs on my blogroll are blogs I visit even thogh some of them don't have me blogrolled. I visit blogs and bloggers who don't have me linked I just do my thing and enjoy writing and visiting. I look at it like this if people want to blogroll you they will personally I will never ask to be blogrolled on anybodys blog. Unless there was something that would come to pass by asking them to blogroll me. But personally I don't ask and there are some that I would never blog roll because of the contents on their blogs.

But I don't ask let blogmaster of that blog blogroll you if he or she feels like it.


Chance

Kip said...

To TTD,

Biggie,


Your husband did a post on Biggie. I have passed by the spot where biggie was stot and killed manytimes it is at the corner of Wilshireblvd and Faifax. Death Row (now called the row suge knight is the owner of the Tha Row) it one mile up the street on Wilshire blvd and San Vicente blvd.


It is sad that all this violence happened.

TTD said...

chance u stay getting in shout outs to Cali.. that's cool!

i've been waiting on others to comment.. didnt want to take over the blogscene.. you know how some of your viewers dont like that D

Kip said...

What's up TTD,

How is your new job going I hope swell.

Chance

Kip said...

TTD,


Do you have a favorite writer or author?

TTD said...

its ok.. as long as im not in training.. im able to blog! well comment.. i'll have to save the posting for when im at my part-time gig on the weekends.. but thanks for asking!

Kip said...

To TTD,

Your husband did a post on Biggie I did a post on M.C. Hammer at my blog Hammer is no gangsta rapper.

TTD said...

no fav writer.. MC Hammer??? Why?

NegroPino™ said...

Good nite all :)

Ddot the King said...

her favorite writer is THE KING!!!


Good night Missy! Dream of me!

Kip said...

M.C. Hammer was trying for a while to project a gangsta image. It just ain't him he was trying to fit in with these gansta rappers. He is a performer not gangsta a rapper he also has a blog with google blogger it is mchammer.blogspot.com and he allows comments and he answers his commenters.

Kip said...

Fav writer is the king, good choice.

Kip said...

good bye missy take care

Ddot the King said...

Chance please tell me you're not advertising MC Hammer's blog on my blog....just please tell me you're not doing that...

Lāā said...

Hi everyone...it just took me 10 minutes to read ALL of the comments.

I like the poem D.

Kip said...
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
Kip said...

DUde no! no I'm not everyone know who hammer is he needs no one to advertise for him. I'm just saying he has a google account. And I was just letting you king and the other know. I figure you would not view hammer as a threat he has a lot of females already that's why he got into some trouble in the past.


Delete the comment or I will delete the hammer comment if google blogger will allow me.

Kip said...

King Delete the mchammer.blogspot.com comment

Drama Kween said...

ok, done lurking...hi peoples who wasn't here this morning

Kip said...

Hi Kween,


Hope U R doing swell.

Chance

Kip said...

To the bloghood,


Many of you are about to check out so have a nice day, the day is still young out here in Cali.

And it is beautiful.

Drama Kween said...

Chance,

I'm aight...not great not bad, just aight an you?

TTD said...

i started to say u d... but then i was like HELL NO!!! lol

hey laa laa! how u feeling today?

Ddot the King said...

Chance I have a question for you little buddy. Do you think I don't like the advertising because it's some kind of threat to me losing readers, more specifically the female ones?

Kip said...

I doing swell and well, I'm just sitting here thinking about what essay, I'm going to put up. And sitting here looking out at the mountains.

Lāā said...

Hey TTD, I'm doing ok. Thanks for asking.

Ddot the King said...

Hey Laa! We missed you around here today!

Drama Kween said...

LaaLaa...i really need you to be your character and get that person...

Lāā said...

I know you gonna say something smart D, but I had other things to do that didn't involve being on your blog.

Kip said...

To the king,

Of course not your readers are your readers and they are loyal, so peace on that (meaning no need to discuss it any further I understand).

Also, females are females they know what they like when they get tired they will find a new player on the bloghood Peace on that.


Advertising I thought you meant just regular bloggers here who want to drive traffic to their blogs by advertising here at your blog.

I mentioned hammer because biigie was mentioned and I thought that you King and others would be kinda shocked find out that hammer has a blog.

Since we all remember him, I was just infoming that was all and I felt that you would not mind hammer because he is a celebrity. And you might want to go drop off a comment because he answers his commenters. That was all Homey and offense intended trust me G. And that's on the What Peace on that.



Chance

Lāā said...

Who did I kill again?

Drama Kween said...

some arbitary guys and only shot King and Rell...

Ddot the King said...

I've been to Hammer's blog before Chance and left a comment. It's interesting.


Laa what in the world could've been more important than hanging out on my blog?!!!

Kip said...

To the King,


KOOL! I'm with it


Chance

Ddot the King said...

Goodnight Subjects....

Lāā said...

Oh, I thought you wanted me to handle somebody else.

Drama Kween said...

LaaLaa lol I was thinking about that...but I can handle that one lol

Kip said...

Take care everyone Cali out.


Chance

Mahndisa S. Rigmaiden said...

03 10 06

Hey DDOT: Regarding some previous banter...I will still visit your site, but I have to delink you too, since you don't comment and that isn't fair is it? I will still put you on blog watch posts though cuz you are funny!!!

Rell said...

darn early days -- I bet I'm the first one here and the only one who woke up early to work on his thesis!

Drama Kween said...

lol nope Rell you're not...i'm getting of early today so i came in at 6

TTD said...

how about them terps?!? although they almost blew it!