
As you guys know I am here to inspire, educate, and entertain. So today I am posting a very deep poem that will hopefully make us all think about our how we treat others and how we look at the world.The poem is by James Patrick Kinney and I hope you will all enjoy it as much The King.
It is called "The Cold Within":
Six humans trapped by happenstance
In black and bitter cold
Each possessed a stick of wood,
Or so the story's told.
Their dying fire in need of logs,
The first woman held hers back
For on the faces around the fire
She noticed one was black.
The next man looking 'cross the way
Saw one not of his church
And couldn't bring himself to give
The fire his stick of birch.
The third one sat in tattered clothes
He gave his coat a hitch,
Why should his log be put to use
To warm the idle rich?
The rich man just sat back and thought
Of the wealth he had in store,
And how to keep what he had earned
From the lazy, shiftless poor.
The black man's face bespoke revenge
As the fire passed from his sight,
For all he saw in his stick of wood
Was a chance to spite the white.
And the last man of this forlorn group
Did naught except for gain,
Giving only to those who gave
Was how he played the game.
The logs held tight in death's stilled hands
Was proof of human sin,
They didn't die from the cold without,
They died from the cold within.
Wasn't that great? I hope you enjoyed and will be able to take something away from it.
184 comments:
and what exactly did YOU take away from it??
That if you treat others like crap you will die!!! LOL
Interesting.. Lemme ponder this.. I'm in a different zone right now
First of all Bombshell let me welcome you to the most popular place on the world wide web!! I hope you will become a regular. I will expecting to be linked on your page by the end of business. Thanks in advance. :)
And yes I find it very interesting as well. Did anybody see the tv show Black & White last night?
no.. but i heard that's supposed to be a really good show. did u see it? how was it?
Yeah I watched it last night. It was very interesting.
I just realized that Caramel is Bklyn Bombshell!!! LMAO!
i saw the previews for it.. it looked like it would be..
OMGoodness! LOL.. you look so different w/o the blonde!
lol i was about to say king if you visit other people blogs more often you will see who they are when the come to your kingdom...lol re-greeting folks...
I liked the poem it was soooooo much better than most I heard last night...
fyi after yesterday's fiasco i renamed my blog to my kweendom (though somebody did that name for me on link on their blog)
LMAO @ you King.. gawd.. you are soooo SELF CENTERED.. LOL.. Tell em Kween if he visited mo often he would know!!!
I am not really thinkin bout this.. I can't.. my mind is in my Biggie Zone.. so pardon me..
Black & White.. did not watch it.. I saw part of the making and I was already irritated by it that I didn't want to watch it.. and listening to the Steve Harvey show this am coming in.. I see my feelings were mirrored by others.. We'll see though. i may watch it next week for gp
speaking of linking.. YOU NEED TO LINK ME... since I'm no longer Blogger of the Week..
You mean you guys want me to visit other peoples blogs?! You can't be serious!
My Kweendom?! Oh brother.
lol...I mean think about it King...wouldn't like to see the background and read the expressions of the people that come to your kingdom...or at least the ones you have linked...they may actually represent something you are totally against....like kobe lovers or something and you would never know cuz you rarely venture out
Good morning. I really enjoyed the poem. It was a sad depiction of our own society. People would rather die than help somebody that is different than themselves.
I missed Black-White. I wanted to see it but I got the times mixed up.
Visit other people's blogs? Well, he did visit me yesterday. I feel so privileged!!!!!
oh yeah on topic...what did i take away from the poem...life is already short enough, but to live it with a defensive spirit, or with any kind of hate or racism will only make it shorter
i know right! how about.. unless u visit (and comment) more, you'll be de-linked (if that's a word!) and no one who doesn't already know about you would ever come to visit!
i second that TTD
it's very simple...i have put myself into practicing this daily...go to your own blog...click on your links and the post for the day on each blog...you'll be amazed as to how easy it is...lol
and heres the kicker....leave a comment....oh my
03 09 06
Good poem. Kinda makes you take stock of how you behave:)
If I leave a comment on a million blogs then I'm no longer exclusive. Did you see what Chele said? She felt priveleged. That is the feeling I want folks to get when I leave a comment. I'm The King baby I do whatever I please...
i believe she was being sarcastic!
The King...lol
Sarcasm? That's not allowed her in The Kingdom!!
the king cannot be pegged...he's so diverse :-D
yes he can kween.. he can be pegged as an arrogant jerk that can be tolerated :o)
Personally I would have used my log to bash in their skulls, make a fire, and then roast their carcasses for dinner, but I would have done it without regards to race, sex, or religion. I'm an equal opportunity destroyer.
but TTD he is so much more than that...He's a prick...a dick head...a butt hole...and sometimes overly sensitve punk...lol
Love you King
Hey Julissa :)
I did stay up to watch at least 30 mins of it.....i wish the Black ppl had better make up if Micheal can do it so can they.....the family they picked to me wasn't realistic......They shoulda got them some ppl from the hood not from suburbia.......and the premise for the show was DOES RACISM STILL EXIST IN AMERICA? Nobody gotta go undercover to know the answer to that.....
R.I.P. BIg..just had to get that out the way
Good morning Gang
TTD.. I'm wit you there.. how about a 3rd on that motion!!!
maybe we should de-link him and have him earn his right to be linked again....hmmm
i was about to say missy.. how can you speak to julissa & not everyone else! but good morning..
sarcasm? me?
im wit that kween! and caramel.. yuor were the 3rd.. so it's official! everyone de-link d!!
I'm good JG. Thanks for asking. I'm glad you didn't join the BASH THE KING party.
she doesnt know the real you yet.. dont worry overtime, she'll see & will be on our side :oP
Very well said VX...
But I hate winter!!
funny thing is, if we de-link him he'll never know...lol
jenny.. he put you under his spell.. dont worry, you'll snap out of it soon! :o)
true.. but no one new would ever come visit him! and he lives for new women to visit so he can flirt w/ them!
I did enjoy that poem. People are too busy being tight that they are also loosing out in the end. Great poem. Black & White was interesting. I expected more, but maybe it will reveal more next week.
Freakalee I am charming and witty so intelligent women are going to be attracted to me but no I am far too shy and too picky to get any play from anybody. I haven't gotten any in almost a year!
Yeah Hali I am expecting a little bit more action as the weeks go on from Black & White but it was a pretty good start.
Is this your first time here? Let me go check your blog out to make sure you have me linked over there!
TTD can I do it???
King can I do it???
LOL...let's keep the peace. You gotta have a good sense of humor if you're going to hang out. LOL
oh i am laughin, and i will have fun...and it will be ENTERTAINING :-D
oh no Julissa, she just having fun...please she'll tell you that she already had King...but you know everyone has to do charity work from time to time...King is such a good guy...
Absolutely. But I like a bit of a challenge.
I'm not arrogant enough to think these little catfights have anything to do with me. It's a woman thing.
awwww LadyCav...do I sense tension in your typing...fyi you used bitch out out of context...I am not a female dog...though some can say that you look like one, so maybe you should use that word for yourself sweetie
:-}
68 responses by 10:55 a.m. and I thought I got here halfway early.
for the sake of the kingdom...LadyCav lets just shake hands and chill...
Sup Rell....we gonna win the ACC tournament or what?
Da hell did I stumble upon?
im w/ u julissa.. she only pops up to say something negative when we're ALL here just to trip & have fun and make our work day go by quickly..
TTD and JUlISSA exactly...
now moving on
TTD i am so glad you are amongst us again..my double mint twin
:-)
wow...again out of context...i was just thinking about linking you too...since you're not linked over here...
now see let's relate this situation to the poem...myself, TTD, Julissa, and LC sitting around a dying fire...who would give their stick up to feed the fire...lol
i wanna live.. so i'd give my stick, but i'd also do a little of what grant suggested.. LMAO
lol...TTD, I was thinking the same thing...
this is ummm weird -- yall plan on recording the rest of this fight? :-)
Ddot, got em' fighting over you like that son?
Na I think we lose in the ACC semi-finals which really isn't a bad thing.
lol Julissa...
RELL lol RECORDING...lol when everything in here is already recorded...
Rell thanks for the love btw
Rell this foolishness has nothing to do with me. Trust me.
I see where you're coming from on losing in the semi-finals. I just want someone other than Duke to win.
lol @ julissa.. ok.. what u said!
and rell.. no one is fighting over D.. nobody wants him! people.. no, someone just thinks everyone wants D.. and continues to bring negative energy into what's supposed to be a fun environment
go Terps!! LOL yeah right.. like that'll ever happen again in the near future!
You mean none of yall want me?! LOL
Thanks Jenny. LOL
and I am still co-heir of the throne..so i already have him...
my bad ya'll.. correction! i dont want his ass!
Ok so now that we got that straight let's move on.
lol...King...u need to right a poem...
Ok Toya that's enough.
lol...wonder how your man would feel about that...
ladies, ladies there is only one Ddot. But I'm here (though you gonna have to fight GP) lol.
oh wow is somewhere here one of your real life ex's?
da hell is going on in here! I think we need to go back to my INTERNET identity post.. LMAO..
jordan symbol is all yall get for now...
lol and Nikki Rell???
toya = ladycav
and yes she is a real live ex
only in your stories Kween, nikki is my homie, older sister type.
Or we got a case of "How stella got her groove back" even though nikki ain't that old.
I'm only 23! So much to learn, haha.
D I'm calling a Duke-NCSU final with Duke winning.,
Rell you have to go back to a post king did in Jan to see what toya is to king
D to answer your question early I saw black.white last night.
That was some of the realist/funniest television in quite sometime.
i dont know who the contender will be for the acc final, but i definitely see duke there.. but i have to rep.. i would love to see md there although thats not gonna happen
wow -- she has nothing better to do with her time?
I hope Duke loses in the first round!! I know that's just wishful thinking but I still hope it happens!
Maryland doesn't stand a chance.
Yeah I really liked Black & White and I think it's going to get better.
i would love to see MD in it too...but all way can do is talk to the Lord and Pray for 'em
Rell "wow -- she has nothing better to do with her time? " what are you talking about??
you know the type
loud as a motor bike
but wouldn't bust a grape
in a fruit fight
wow...
i'm so confused -- I can't tell what's parody and what's real.
u r a trip...and from the looks of things you're prolly right...what breed are you pit bull, or mastiif or a combo of both with a lil pug in the mix?
The only thing that's gonna happen is i'mma get to clappin
you and ya girls gon be yappin to the captain
Chill Toya all that extra info isn't necessary.
Is that Angie?! Wow! No lurking allowed Ang!
i thought the beef was dead??
Well we're going to have to break that habit Angie! I need to see a picture of you too!
Jenny that's a good question. They all seem normal when I meet them.
i know king ain't talking about no pics...lol
SEEM lol
Mysterious huh....ok well do your thing.
LOL @ angie.. I was thinking the same thing when I wrote it
Look we're going to stop talking about that subject ok ladies? Let's move on.
Open forum sounds good. What is on your mind Angie?
Seriously Toya I'm going to start deleting everything you post. Stop with the nonsense.
Yeah I like poetry. I used to write a lot more than i do now. I've been to open mic but I've never had the nerve to get up and perform. Maybe I will someday.
lol that's an easy question to answer...
FORUM: Since this is a day that will always be honored in Hip Hop...what are some of you all's greatest hip hop memory...
When do you first fall in love with Hip Hop?
sorry been watching a lot of brown sugar...i love that movie
not too mention you puttin another person's business out there...
WOW!! I went to lunch and come back....scroll up and got some info.......
Yeah I might come check that out. I try to stay away from B-more as much as possible but I guess I can make an exception for this. :)
Wazup Missy!!! Disregard all that other stuff.
I loved Krush Groove too! I used to watch it over and over.
Angie I hate D.C. streets too so I'm an equal opportunity hater. lol
my wonder can tell you that i am not a true hip hop head, so when i first fell in love with hip hop is when it merged with r&b...the best of both worlds it became for me...i would rap from time to time, but mjb helped me fall in love with hip hop...
i didnt like hip hop at 1st.. i guess Biggie did it for me...
and what's up w/ boycotting bmore...
D if you can survive Chocolate city, than some areas of bmore is a stroll in the park for you...
I think Run DMC did it for me in the beginning and it really popped off for me again when The Chronic,Southernplayalisticcadillacmusic, and Ready to Die all came out back to back to back.
i used to mess w/ salt-n-pepper too.. but more in their latter days
Salt & Pepper might have caused me to go into puberty! I loved them chicks. PUSH IT was too much for me. Everytime I heard it or saw the video...well let's just say it caused a reaction. LOL
oh i was all on salt and pepa...hardcore...i was salt my home girl was pepa and my othe homegirl was spin (on the fischer price joint)...but i wasn't hip hop conscious then...but i did love them
salt n pepa's here and we're in effect want you to push it babe...
Don't even get me started on Tupac!
the poem was excellent.
i can relate.
long time no speak.
i've been on military exercise.
i am back.
shiznit happizziles.
carry on.
gone to lunch.. brb
What's up Black!! Good to have you back!
alright now that i let some steam out on my blog...i am back and better than before
:-D
SO MANY TEARS!!! That's one of the best tupc...nah...One of the best songs ever...period! I love the whole ME AGAINST THE WORLD album.
I'm doing my Biggie tribute on Arson's blog so go over there and participate.
i'll pass.. not much of a fan of arson.. but my husband did a post on Biggie as well
TTD it's my post. Arson hasn't posted on his own blog in months.
ok.. i'll check it out then..
lol...
WHY THE SILENCE
I just got back from lunch. I don't know where everybody else is...
ok...next time let us know, thanks honey!
That was a very good poem King Thank you for sharing it.
You're welcome Chance. You're a little late today, what's the deal?
I like the writings guy De maupassant he wrote similar type short stories that had to do with human character defects check him out sometimes if you have not already read or heard of him.
He was french (france).
Chance
I'm so busy with writing and answering email from good people whom email me. Also I stayed up late last night into the wee hours of the morning. I love the night, the night is feminine and the day is masculine.
Chance
Speaking of tupac, death row (now called Tha row) records is located in beverly hills at the corner of wilshire blvd and San vincente. There is a big sigh that says Tha Row. You can't miss it I have pssaed by there many times. Sometimes there are low riders out there.
Blogs and Links,
I read some comments about blog and links here left by certain commenters.
Well all blogs on my blogroll are blogs I visit even thogh some of them don't have me blogrolled. I visit blogs and bloggers who don't have me linked I just do my thing and enjoy writing and visiting. I look at it like this if people want to blogroll you they will personally I will never ask to be blogrolled on anybodys blog. Unless there was something that would come to pass by asking them to blogroll me. But personally I don't ask and there are some that I would never blog roll because of the contents on their blogs.
But I don't ask let blogmaster of that blog blogroll you if he or she feels like it.
Chance
To TTD,
Biggie,
Your husband did a post on Biggie. I have passed by the spot where biggie was stot and killed manytimes it is at the corner of Wilshireblvd and Faifax. Death Row (now called the row suge knight is the owner of the Tha Row) it one mile up the street on Wilshire blvd and San Vicente blvd.
It is sad that all this violence happened.
chance u stay getting in shout outs to Cali.. that's cool!
i've been waiting on others to comment.. didnt want to take over the blogscene.. you know how some of your viewers dont like that D
What's up TTD,
How is your new job going I hope swell.
Chance
TTD,
Do you have a favorite writer or author?
its ok.. as long as im not in training.. im able to blog! well comment.. i'll have to save the posting for when im at my part-time gig on the weekends.. but thanks for asking!
To TTD,
Your husband did a post on Biggie I did a post on M.C. Hammer at my blog Hammer is no gangsta rapper.
no fav writer.. MC Hammer??? Why?
Good nite all :)
her favorite writer is THE KING!!!
Good night Missy! Dream of me!
M.C. Hammer was trying for a while to project a gangsta image. It just ain't him he was trying to fit in with these gansta rappers. He is a performer not gangsta a rapper he also has a blog with google blogger it is mchammer.blogspot.com and he allows comments and he answers his commenters.
Fav writer is the king, good choice.
good bye missy take care
Chance please tell me you're not advertising MC Hammer's blog on my blog....just please tell me you're not doing that...
Hi everyone...it just took me 10 minutes to read ALL of the comments.
I like the poem D.
DUde no! no I'm not everyone know who hammer is he needs no one to advertise for him. I'm just saying he has a google account. And I was just letting you king and the other know. I figure you would not view hammer as a threat he has a lot of females already that's why he got into some trouble in the past.
Delete the comment or I will delete the hammer comment if google blogger will allow me.
King Delete the mchammer.blogspot.com comment
ok, done lurking...hi peoples who wasn't here this morning
Hi Kween,
Hope U R doing swell.
Chance
To the bloghood,
Many of you are about to check out so have a nice day, the day is still young out here in Cali.
And it is beautiful.
Chance,
I'm aight...not great not bad, just aight an you?
i started to say u d... but then i was like HELL NO!!! lol
hey laa laa! how u feeling today?
Chance I have a question for you little buddy. Do you think I don't like the advertising because it's some kind of threat to me losing readers, more specifically the female ones?
I doing swell and well, I'm just sitting here thinking about what essay, I'm going to put up. And sitting here looking out at the mountains.
Hey TTD, I'm doing ok. Thanks for asking.
Hey Laa! We missed you around here today!
LaaLaa...i really need you to be your character and get that person...
I know you gonna say something smart D, but I had other things to do that didn't involve being on your blog.
To the king,
Of course not your readers are your readers and they are loyal, so peace on that (meaning no need to discuss it any further I understand).
Also, females are females they know what they like when they get tired they will find a new player on the bloghood Peace on that.
Advertising I thought you meant just regular bloggers here who want to drive traffic to their blogs by advertising here at your blog.
I mentioned hammer because biigie was mentioned and I thought that you King and others would be kinda shocked find out that hammer has a blog.
Since we all remember him, I was just infoming that was all and I felt that you would not mind hammer because he is a celebrity. And you might want to go drop off a comment because he answers his commenters. That was all Homey and offense intended trust me G. And that's on the What Peace on that.
Chance
Who did I kill again?
some arbitary guys and only shot King and Rell...
I've been to Hammer's blog before Chance and left a comment. It's interesting.
Laa what in the world could've been more important than hanging out on my blog?!!!
To the King,
KOOL! I'm with it
Chance
Goodnight Subjects....
Oh, I thought you wanted me to handle somebody else.
LaaLaa lol I was thinking about that...but I can handle that one lol
Take care everyone Cali out.
Chance
03 10 06
Hey DDOT: Regarding some previous banter...I will still visit your site, but I have to delink you too, since you don't comment and that isn't fair is it? I will still put you on blog watch posts though cuz you are funny!!!
darn early days -- I bet I'm the first one here and the only one who woke up early to work on his thesis!
lol nope Rell you're not...i'm getting of early today so i came in at 6
how about them terps?!? although they almost blew it!
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